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"we fight all people."
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"we fight for all people."p. 35:
any treat from without
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any threat from withoutp. 37:
Learning ever facet of the business.
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Learn every facet of the business.p. 40:
the only Huey pilots to that have survived
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the only Huey pilots to have survivedsuccess entrepreneurs Is to find
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success entrepreneurs is to findp. 43:
opportunities and markets Entrepreneurs are generalists.
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opportunities and markets. Entrepreneurs are generalists.p. 49:
"foreigners" from the China, France
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"foreigners" from China, FranceIt was no different than
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It was no different fromp. 71:
If a doctor or dentist goes on vacation, so does their income.
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if a doctor or dentist goes on vacation, so does his income.[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
p. 81:
For example, if I were 30 minutes late
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For example, if I was 30 minutes lateIf the plebe had over 300 demerits, they were dismissed
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If the plebe had over 300 demerits, he was dismissed[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
even if their grades were great.
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even if his grades were great.[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
p. 86:
The paragraph beginning with "sometimes a person" then shifts to the plural: "they have" and "they are."
[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
p. 88:
Judgment Day is everyday.
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Judgment Day is every day.[The word "everyday" means common.]
p. 95:
If the customer knows you care about them.
[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
p. 137:
A person must do what they know they must, even if they hate doing it.
[If the subject is singular, the pronoun should be singular.]
p. 146:
I needed a teacher who was a leader first.
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